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Thursday, November 3, 2011

The plot thickens (into a tasty bernaise sauce)

I've always been a pantser. Other than a basic plot idea I let my main character take charge and lead me around. It's an exciting way to write, since I never know what's going to happen next. Much like reading. The problem is I sometimes end up with unnecessary scenes, awkward tangents, wrong turns, dead ends, secondary characters that never should have been given life. It takes FOREVER to straighten it all out in rewrites.


Who's more powerful, me or my characters?

Me, I tell you!

To prove it, this time I've created an outline. Nothing fancy. No snow flaking or plot clocking, just a two-page synopsis that will help guide me when I feel stuck or when the MC decides to go swimming in the Arctic when we should be sailing down the Nile.


I'll let you know how it goes.

To those of you doing NaNo, I'm cheering you from the sidelines and hoping you're having fun with it. I'm piggy-backing on November's creative energy and doing my own version of NaNo--a goal of 1,000 words a day. Rah!

14 comments:

Thea said...

Yay for authorial control! I used to think that letting my characters guide the story would be the more fun, spontaneous and fulfilling kind of writing, but these stories rarely get finished. If I don't know where I'm going, my characters don't know where they're going, either. Sad, but true. Sometimes, it works, but msotly - it doesn't. Not for me, anyway. May your two-page synopsis serve you well!

Tricia J. O'Brien said...

Aaaah, a nice, smooth sail down the Nile. Sounds delightful. :)

Tere Kirkland said...

Yes! I love writing synopses before I get to writing the story. It's my road map, so I can still be spontaneous with the events that happen in between those bigger events, but I have a clear idea of what I'm working toward.

And hey, you're gonna need to write a synopsis anyway, right? Might as well have a starter one.

Good luck!

Lisa Gail Green said...

I started doing the beat sheet just recently to help guide me like that. It helped a great deal when writing the first draft, but then I had more character issues than I'd ever had to deal with! Weird.

Bish Denham said...

Good for you! I tend to write out a few sentences for each chapter. It gives me a bit of a map but doesn't take the fun out of discovering a hidden treasure. Too much pre-planning and I'd lose interest.

J. A. Bennett said...

I like my character making decision as I go along as well. Plotting should really only be about the major turning points. Here's the reference I use that gives me that wiggle room. Hope it all goes well!
http://www.kkitts.net/downloads/files/TenScenePlot.pdf

Tina Moss said...

I admire Pantsers, but you'll have to pry my outline from my cold dead fingers. I cannot dive in without some sort of roadmap. Good luck with your WIP!

MG Higgins said...

Thea--The character-led adventure is wonderful, isn't it? Not always practical, though. *Sigh*

Tricia--Sounds much better than a swim in the Arctic. :)

Tere--My thought exactly! I'm going to need a synopsis eventually, and I hate writing them, so why not get it over with?

Lisa--That is weird. I haven't heard of the beat sheet. Thanks for the tip!

Bish--That's exactly how I feel about too much preplanning. After going to all that work, why bother writing the novel?

J.A.--Thank you for the encouragement and for the link! I'll check it out.

Tina--Hah! You're a true planner.

The Spooky Whisk said...

Very nice post. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you many happy writing days and an oogie boogie night.

Still Halloween, in these them parts.

Kelly Polark said...

I'm using a more detailed outline which is helpful since two of us are writing the mg. I like knowing the general idea, but being able to come up with scenes out of nowhere!

Kristine Asselin said...

Bold you are! LOL. I think you might be a #SemiPantser. A few of us try to tweet w/ that hash tag. Not truly pantsing or plotting.

I just started working with Blake Snyder's beat sheet (SAVE THE CAT is his book, a screenwriter's craft book). It's really helpful, and not at all overwhelming. Cool structure stuff for us Semi-pantsers. :)

Good Luck!

Christina Lee said...

WHOA--hold the phone! :D :D

I do plot points which is halfway b/w I think! Good luck!

MG Higgins said...

Whisk--I love Halloween in your neck of the woods. A week-long spookfest is AOK by me.

Kelly--I think it's so cool you and Jon are writing a novel together, and yeah, a detailed outline is definitely the way to go.

Kris--Yes, I'm a semipantser! Thanks for giving me something to call myself. I've heard of Save the Cat; I'll have to explore it further.

Christina--Thanks! I guess you're a semipantser, too.

Gail Shepherd said...

I agree with Tina; now that I've glommed on to the idea of writing a synopsis in advance, you couldn't separate me from my outline with a pick axe. However, I will say, there is PLENTY of room for improv, embellishment, and flourishes, which are huge fun when you're working within a determined structure. I find, personally, that I'm more creative this way, because I'm spending far less time staring at the screen going "What should happen next?"